To Kill a Mockingbird Paragraph
Have you ever done something that most people would be afraid to do because you don't care what people think, do, or say? Well, I'm reading the book To Kill a Mockingbird and there is a character named Atticus and he is a lawyer defending a black man. This story takes place quite a while ago, and most people are racist. When Atticus is defending this black man, Tom Robinson, Dill runs out of the court room crying because he cannot stand the way Mr. Gilmer is treating Tom Robinson(pg. 226-227). Atticus then explains that this is the way Mr. Gilmer treats black people on the streets too. Also, he says that just because this guy is a different color than the rest of them doesn't mean that he should be treated differently or disrespectfully. As one can see, Atticus didn't care about the fact that this man was a different color, he still treated him the same as he treats everyone else. This was no matter what other people thought, said, or did. Therefore, no one should care what other people think, do, or say because as long as you're doing what you think is right then that should be enough.
Comments:
1. Leslie said: Nat, I think that you have an excellent paragraph. I think it might not be exactly what Mr. Davis is looking for but, it is still a really great paragraph. Don’t forget to use spell check. It has description and it explains what s going on. Good Job! Love always Leslie
2. Wacey said: I think your paragraph is awesome, so don’t let Leslie put you down. I love your explanations and descriptions.
3. Dylan said: I think this is a good paragraph, and you followed the five steps just like you were supposed too. Plus you had a lot of examples from the book….so…….GOOD JOB! :)
4. Stephanie said: I think this is a good paragraph! You could have had more examples, but other than that it was beautiful. Just beautiful!
5. Kelsie said: This is a good paragraph! You should put a quotation in there somewhere and that could only make it better. You did pretty good on the explaining but just make sure you don’t retell everything alright. Good job. (: